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Roses are Red
Violets are blue
Before you promised me
That you would be true

I gave you my love
So that we can start
But instead you just smiled
Right before breaking my heart

So now I am crushed
While you are still free
You're more happy now
That you have forgotten me

The roses are dead
But the violets stayed true
They have left my life
Nothing but Blue
:iconbaka-artist:
Roses are Red, Violets are blue, But which one of them, Are more true?
Simple poem I made in several minutes...didnt think I would actually like it. Sorta.
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~Monipanesiu Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
L O V E I T
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~turntechGeneticist Aug 26, 2011  Student General Artist
this poem is amazing
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:iconxdarkmoonx:
Aww...it's sad and sweet at the same time. I like it. But on your third stanza and third line I think you meant to say 'you're' and not 'your'. Just saying.
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:glomp: I LOVE your poems!
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